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Emo Kid
Contributed by
fake_emptyness
on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 09:18:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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he sits alone,
dressed in black.
with a sad look on his face.
his arms are bleeding,
on one cares.
he screams out "help me",
no one hears.
he sits alone,
crimson in color.
with a hand out streached,
and tears in his eyes.
Copyright ©
fake_emptyness
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2005-10-24 21:18:33]
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Re: Emo Kid
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 09:46:35 PM AEST
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| Emo sucks |
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Re: Emo Kid
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by Sae on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 11:45:20 PM AEST
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| That's sad. That is the description of an emo boy right on the dot though. Good job. |
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Re: Emo Kid
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:41:47 AM AEST
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| very sad and powerful |
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Re: Emo Kid
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 02:55:50 PM AEST
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| Emo kids are sad because they're pathetic individuals, not because they have any real reason to be sad. Poem was extremely generic by the way. |
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