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Stung By Your Sting
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
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Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 06:10:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Im not being funny
But you make me feel quite ill
You know just what I mean
Those butterflies, which thrill
Whenever I hear your voice
Wherever we may meet
Im nowhere near the surface
You blast me off my feet
Your beauty it is such
That Im totally in awe
No one has ever thrown me
Into a spin like this before
This total infatuation
Im never gonna lose
Out of six billion souls
Its yours Ill always choose
How did you do this to me
How have you got me snared
In the honour of your presence
No longer am I scared
It really doesnt matter
What we do, or what we say
My love for you will last forever
Long after my dying day
So sensual, So stunning
No words could truly describe
Natural appeal, youve got it all
You are so bright and so alive
This energy which surrounds you
Its like a swarm of bees
I get stung each time I see you
Never change, I beg you please
You're a very special lady
You dont even need to try
In this world you are perfection
Our god he got you right
One day I hope youll remember
How I used to make you feel
When you do you have to find me
Youre my life, my dream for real.
Copyright ©
Unaekseveer1
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2002-07-25 06:10:56]
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Re: Stung By Your Sting
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by PS_iloveyou on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 12:16:12 PM AEST
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| I hope things work out for you. All were well wrote... |
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Re: Stung By Your Sting
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 12:54:29 PM AEST
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Um Yeah, they will sort of, I think?
Many thanks
Dean
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Re: Stung By Your Sting
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 11:03:52 AM AEST
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Dean, this is a beautiful poem. I love it. I really is a beautiful poem.
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Re: Stung By Your Sting
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 11:15:38 AM AEST
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Many thankyou's Candice,
I am so glad because I really liked this one as well!
I'd written it before we broke up, but I never got to give it to her, it didn't seem right after what was said between us, or what wasn't said more like! Although I never stopped believing my thoughts and feelings in here to be true.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Stung By Your Sting
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 11:33:39 AM AEST
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Dean, I have a few poems that I have written before me and a guy had broken up. They usually end up in the box of stuff for that paricular guy.
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