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A Poem for my Love ( whoever she may be )
Contributed by
doug
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Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 01:52:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Shes quiet and gentle,
shy , sentimental
her intelligence so intrigues
not very tall , quite lovely and small,
no model and nor would she be
sometimes she is lonely
and maybe if only someday
I could say to thee
stop spilling your heart into
sweet poet verses
and give that desire to me
and in Autumn we'd go
with cappuccino and Poe
read in octobers cool mist
and later at home 'neath sweet
burning glow
setting sun , and making love like this...............
Copyright ©
doug
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2005-10-25 01:52:47]
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Re: A Poem for my Love ( whoever she may be )
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by EverlastingDawn on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 07:01:06 AM AEST
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I really like this poem. It's really sweet. Though you might want to change the line "sweet poet verses" to something like "sweet verses of poetry". Good Write
~Dawn |
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Re: A Poem for my Love ( whoever she may be )
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by Kazzy1231 on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 02:25:39 PM AEST
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| Good write,Please check out a few of my poems! |
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Re: A Poem for my Love ( whoever she may be )
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:00:18 PM AEST
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Wow, Doug, this really touched me. What a truly
enchanting piece of poetry. So heartfelt, honest
and sweet.
'Tis rare to capture such beauty ....
~Breezy
(who ADORES the cappuccino and Poe reference! ) |
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