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Liquid Emotion
Contributed by
UnfallenTears
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Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:05:59 AM in AEST
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Don't watch this liquid emotion
These tears aren't real
Let me turn away from beauty's failed existence
And let these bare wounds artificially heal
Don't listen to my unheard screams
These words mean nothing at all
Let me live on in dishonest credulity
Hoping anonymous love will break my fall
Don't try to stop my leave
These hollow footsteps are going nowhere
Let me walk on from this dreamless game
Believing I'll never play again, these pointless dares
Don't care about these empty wisdoms
These names know nothing I feel
Don't watch these liquid emotions
These tears were never real
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Re: Liquid Emotion
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:24:44 AM AEST
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Nice job, looking forward to reading more.
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Re: Liquid Emotion
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 12:30:12 PM AEST
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| I love the title, Great write. |
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Re: Liquid Emotion
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 12:34:16 PM AEST
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yes
that title is excellent
good flow too |
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Re: Liquid Emotion
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by enigma on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 03:40:36 PM AEST
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...wow...I can feel it...think I forgot my afternoon meds!
"Let me live on in dishonest credulity..." I love that line...life is such an oxymoron...
enigma |
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Re: Liquid Emotion
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:24:17 PM AEST
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You've just convinced me to stop using the phrase
"unheard screams" so much. Lately I've read it in four poems .. LOL. For my own part I think I'll say silent screams or come up with something else .. maybe better yet I'll stop all the screaming. (not intended for you. My own poetry is rather drab and yours got me thinking... |
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