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FaLLen Black Rain
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:51:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Drips slowly run down the window
Emphasizing and exaggerating the slow pass of time
Darkness beyond my window panes
Sun, it's scorching rays burn fire across the grass
Alighting in a blinding flash, the droplets on my window
Burning now past all doubts or thoughts of impossibility
Catching fire in a blaze of passion
The fire glinting in life before fading
Leaving a barron wasteland on an empty sun
I look away from this site before me
My eyes drawn back to the streaks on my window panes
Squinting now, the clear, sad drops are black
Burned beyond all thoughts of improbability
The contrast of a bleak world made black and white in a second
Determination brought on in a burning streak
Shining in the waning light the drops begin to fall
Burnt and tortured they run down the window
Slowly, these shimmering drops of black rain.
Copyright ©
MysticFireFairy
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2005-10-25 23:51:39]
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Re: FaLLen Black Rain
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 03:25:39 AM AEST
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deep and moving write. I feel there is something lying below the surface of this very personal. Vivid images throughout.
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Re: FaLLen Black Rain
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 07:27:39 AM AEST
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| very powerful, filled with such emotion |
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Re: FaLLen Black Rain
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by xanix on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 02:10:58 PM AEST
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| That was very well ritten I liked it a lot |
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Re: FaLLen Black Rain
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 12:30:47 PM AEST
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another masterpeice u do dark very well it's most becoming on u . . .
(((((Kayla))))))
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