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Mask
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 06:37:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Shadows forming
Past rewound
What lies beneath?
Mask turned round
Once told tale
Forgotten no more
Haunting complete
Pain de jour
Hidden well
From inquiring eye
Beneath porcelain
Faade does hide
More than heart
Pulling away
Afraid from safety
To finally stray
Masquerade final
Honesty withheld
Self delusion
Hidden under shell
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2005-10-26 06:37:44]
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Re: Mask
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 07:04:13 AM AEST
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i like it, beautifuly written
well done, keep up the good work |
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Re: Mask
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 11:33:07 AM AEST
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| Not a bad attempt |
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Re: Mask
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 12:09:27 PM AEST
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beautiful Shari. Though so sad hope your ok
Michelle |
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Re: Mask
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 03:46:08 PM AEST
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| Its amazing how you hold so much feeling in so few words..sad, yes, and well expressed. |
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Re: Mask
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by Suit_Of_Armor on
Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 07:22:59 PM AEST
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| Yes, masks...I know them well. You expressed your feeling on the subject beautifully. I love your work. Keep it up! :) |
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