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ALONE
Contributed by
SHAY_shay24
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Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 09:19:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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ALONE
Trying to live trying to do whats right.
Fighting back tears alone in the night.
Afarid to be with people yet afarid to be alone.
Looking for a place one of my own.
I''m tired of failing of falling apart.
Looking for ways to open my heart.
I know i will be fine if i stay strong.
Prove to the world about me they are wrong.
Wrong about me cause im better than that.
better than wehre i have been and where iam at.
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SHAY_shay24
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2005-10-26 09:19:39]
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Re: ALONE
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by Dri on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 01:26:28 PM AEST
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| the spelling kinda falls apart at the end, but i'm still impressed. the rhyming here is so natural, so real... i can't do that. ever. i'm so jealous!! (: |
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Re: ALONE
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by xanix on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 02:07:41 PM AEST
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| I liked it lot but it might want to be a little more colorfule |
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Re: ALONE
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by Moe on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 02:19:59 PM AEST
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| Not bad hon, short and see a lot of room for more, but good as is. |
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Re: ALONE
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by crazy on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 04:52:13 PM AEST
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i know how you fell i dont want to get hurt yet still want that someone to hold me
perfectly spoken |
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