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tangible love or lust?????
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 05:28:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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watching the tangible beauty of the luminescent light that radiates around you
like a small child gazing at a flower your eyes mesmerize me with absloute wonder
weak and feeble you voice melts me like heat on sand so smooth
reflecting this grace as you walk like a dancer or a rose in the wind
i never new love could feel this way
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2005-10-26 17:28:44]
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Re: tangible love or lust?????
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by hoist1atca on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 12:30:44 AM AEST
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Very Nice Write-
I hope for your sake this one knows how special they are to you...
Joe |
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Re: tangible love or lust?????
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by GurlyTye on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 12:25:24 PM AEST
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| you said it all in your authors note. short but sweet |
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