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Theresa
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Nazmythian
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Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 12:17:24 AM in AEST
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You whispered I love you
Knowing hed never hear
He couldnt believe that
Youd still want to be near
His deafness did blind him
From what he should have seen
You'd be there beside him
Despite what fate might bring
His pride interceded
Then he pushed you away
And you loved none other
Until your dying day
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Theresa, did you teach her
To be what you couldnt be
See what she means to me
Here in my heart
Theresa, can you reach her
From somewhere beyond this place
Take us in your embrace
While were apart
Hold us close in the dark
~
Ill never accomplish
Such as what he has done
But she believes in me
Says Ive only begun
With her there beside me
Ill be more than I am
Her faith could then guide me
It would steady my hand
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Theresa let me please her
Return what shes given me
Loving her endlessly
The way you do still
Theresa, should I meet her
In some other place or time
Shed complete the life Id find
As ink to a quill
And she always will
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Theresa, did you teach her
To be what you couldnt be
See what she means to me
Here in my heart
Theresa, can you reach her
From somewhere beyond this place
Take us in your embrace
Here in the dark
I've been hers from the start
~
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Re: Theresa
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 01:59:31 AM AEST
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| Oh wow, that poem is awesom, so touching! Thank you for sharing it! |
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Re: Theresa
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 02:17:42 AM AEST
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Naz, this was just beautiful. It really is sad and yet so beautiful. I like the path of writing your on. You seem to get better and better with each post.
Brilliant stuff.
Jane*~* |
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Re: Theresa
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by GurlyTye on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 12:16:32 PM AEST
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| each new thing i read... i always seem to find some way to relate. you are so talented. and it makes me proud to be your daughter. one of my favoite things to do it share your work with my friends. bragging rights i guess. i have learnd alot from you and i really feel that much of my growth in my writting and my life can be attributed to you and mom. i don't know many who are as lucky s i am to have such wonderful parents |
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Re: Theresa
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 08:17:27 PM AEST
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Snazzy, you never cease to amaze, my dear friend. This was breathtaking.
A brilliant work of art that captures the mind, body and soul. I've read this
over and over and am still staring at my blank flat screen, wondering how
on earth I could ever possibly describe what your writes evoke in me.
Each one is so different and yet, still holds a power over me that I can't
quite capture in words. Just know that your writes hold me spellbound.
A very pleasant inclination, to say the least. This piece, in particular is so
daringly heartgripping. The sheer beauty of it brings tears to my eyes.
You have an amazing heart, scotty.
C'est une belle chose ....
*hugs and stuff*
~Breezy
(who promises to personally fly to seattle and slap you upside the head if you
do not do something with this most extraordinary and rare talent!) |
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Re: Theresa
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by ArsenicMyst on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 11:23:36 PM AEST
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*
of course reading the commentary above
add to and re-inforces my thoughts and
reaction to this wirting ...
however they dont take away my initial feelings
of the beauty of this lyric poem ...
it glows with deep heartfelt love & devotion
*´¨`·.¸¸.*arsenic
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Re: Theresa
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 06:37:28 PM AEST
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Very good job Nazzy...This is so spiritual, and emotive, and open. I enjoyed this read, and I especially like the ending. Well done!
Scorp. |
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Re: Theresa
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 02:31:47 PM AEST
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*Shakes head with disbelief, yet knowing that this is more than just illusion...*
What I've come to find in your work.. is that there is always a story. Something hidden and personal... something beautiful and radiant... there is so much laced around your words, so much meaning... even if the reader doesn't know the entire tale, the emotions embedded there can be related to... indeed. I could hear it, this nostalgic and solemn melody of heavenly proportions...
Theresa, can you reach her
From somewhere beyond this place
Take us in your embrace
Here in the dark
I've been hers from the start
Riveting.... absolutely divine and heart-wrenchingly vivid. My friend.... your words must be recognized by all.... there is too much beauty in your poems and songs to be hidden in shadows... Resonating with truth, and flooding with emotion. I thank you... for every syllable that comes from your fingertips. Enchant us once again, chasseur... Always a pleasure reading, commenting, and hearing from you, cheri. Hoping all is well. Merci beaucoup for sharing this masterpiece with us. A true gem of a write. All my love. Forever,
Votre petite fleur de souffrance et bonheur,
~*Stephy*~ (Who is still awestruck and breathless...) |
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Re: Theresa
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 02:33:35 PM AEST
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*Shakes head with disbelief, yet knowing that this is more than just illusion...*
What I've come to find in your work.. is that there is always a story. Something hidden and personal... something beautiful and radiant... there is so much laced around your words, so much meaning... even if the reader doesn't know the entire tale, the emotions embedded there can be related to... indeed. I could hear it, this nostalgic and solemn melody of heavenly proportions...
Theresa, can you reach her
From somewhere beyond this place
Take us in your embrace
Here in the dark
I've been hers from the start
Riveting.... absolutely divine and heart-wrenchingly vivid. My friend.... your words must be recognized by all.... there is too much beauty in your poems and songs to be hidden in shadows... Resonating with truth, and flooding with emotion. I thank you... for every syllable that comes from your fingertips. Enchant us once again, chasseur... Always a pleasure reading, commenting, and hearing from you, cheri. Hoping all is well. Merci beaucoup for sharing this masterpiece with us. A true gem of a write. All my love. Forever,
Votre petite fleur de souffrance et bonheur,
~*Stephy*~ (Who is still awestruck and breathless...) |
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Re: Theresa
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 07:02:58 PM AEST
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wow Nazzy...........wow
I long to hear the full story!!! This leaves me a feeling of sadness and devotion...and true love.
A greatly emotive piece good sir!!! |
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