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Life, Love And Regret
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 02:32:56 AM in AEST
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crisp, tingle
scalp alive with
.....laughter?
shallow eyes turned down
to life, love and regret
the metallic goddes
pressed deep into flesh
scarlet overflow
gasp, hold my breath
this is for
life, love and regret
open mouthed awe
cold, quiver
inhale
bursting
with life, love and regret
clatter, grip
hold the skin together
hide the blade
the all knowing eye
of life, love and regret
quick.
arm under water
wrist bathed in
life, love and regret
numb.
hollow, let go
good-bye
ife, and love
the regret is
the burn never ceases
the pain forever increases
without love
life....is my regret
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weepingprophet
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2005-10-27 02:32:56]
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Re: Life, Love And Regret
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 02:52:57 AM AEST
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| wow... |
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Re: Life, Love And Regret
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 05:39:19 AM AEST
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| incredible.. well done |
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Re: Life, Love And Regret
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:30:05 AM AEST
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Ohh I should be reading more of your work. You have the smooth flow with your words, it makes the person think of what your trying to convey.
This was brilliant, thanks for sharing it.
Jane~ |
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Re: Life, Love And Regret
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by EverlastingDawn on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:38:47 AM AEST
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I like the poem
It has really nice flow
Really powerful, and emotional
Good Write
~Dawn |
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Re: Life, Love And Regret
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 04:01:23 PM AEST
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Amazing! Another great piece.. it's oustanding how
you give a single word it's tremendous weight.
clatter, grip
hold the skin together
hide the blade
the all knowing eye
of life, love and regret
Graphic and suspenseful to the utmost.
keep up the excellent writing.. i'm a fan always.
dw |
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Re: Life, Love And Regret
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by bttrflynajar on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:23:18 PM AEST
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| so greatly expressed.. i can almost feel the stinging relief in your poem. |
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Re: Life, Love And Regret
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 08:02:48 PM AEST
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the only word i can think of for this is: beautiful.
simply beautiful |
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