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Death is Cold
Contributed by
angryhippylibral
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Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 10:05:48 PM in AEST
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Tears run rivers
Through my home
Conversations harsh, brittleeveryones
At breaking point now
But all I feel is cold
Mum, shes crying
Dads always shouting
About the traffic or something
And my bother just sits; stares
But all I feel is cold
Fear cries out in anger
Against the screech of breaks
The glass shatters,
My heart shakes
But all I feel is cold
Missing someone dearly
But I cant understand.
They say someone died
They say that someones
Me
But all death is cold
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angryhippylibral
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2005-10-27 22:05:48]
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Re: Death is Cold
(User Rating: 1 )
by jilted on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:29:56 AM AEST
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| awesome, that was really cool, wasnt expecting the ending. |
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Re: Death is Cold
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by ChibiMiroku on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 11:46:13 PM AEST
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Lots....of emotion. I really wasnt expecting the ending. But it delivered the shock and everything it was supposed to, so...
Well done! :D |
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