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Autumns Children
Contributed by
bethie
on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 12:17:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Old October trees
cast off their dying leaves,
spreading a saffron blanket
on an inhumane earth;
Ancient autumnal children,
are on their knees
with heads bowed
praying for peace
already ages since their birth.
Copyright ©
bethie
... [
2005-10-28 12:17:12]
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Re: Autumns Children
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:37:27 AM AEST
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| A beautiful poem, you have a talent for incorporating nature into your work and yet not in a strictly traditional way, your poetry seems have veins of deeper substance running through it. |
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