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Dawn
Contributed by
sonic_phoenix
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Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 09:40:17 AM in AEST
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falling through the clouds, locked in this perilous flight
never really living, waiting to end my cold life
Lost without direction, frailing, wanting, breaking
my soul lifes trepidition, blood soaking in me
for in the end, all was red and oh very dead to me
the darkness pierced my heart, music sets me free
Trapt in my fear, needing some way to steer clear
fighting blind, all is ever forgiven or forgotten in time
seeing the worst in all, yet hopeing to hope for change
Yet in the end flying away, and starting yet again
reborn from flame
driven by pain
finding passion in my heart
and the question
What have i become?
Suddenly i'm free, nothing holds onto me
the stars shine in my dark, ever a growing spark
who am i? that which relearns to fly
knowing nothing, yet are most content
to leave each dawn, as a new chance
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Re: Dawn
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by cocobeware on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 11:18:03 AM AEST
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| good write! thats how i feel at this point.keep it up |
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Re: Dawn
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 04:15:23 PM AEST
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| nice write |
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Re: Dawn
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 05:04:34 PM AEST
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absolutely amazing! i love it!!! you should be proud of...it's fantastic...
almost could be considered "dark" poetry...
- Bethani - |
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