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sometimes i can't
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
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Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 12:29:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sometimes I just can't sleep at night
because i see your face
Sometimes I can't eat
because i need to be in your arms
Sometimes I find it hard to breath
Because I need to hear your voice
sometimes i can't live
because i need to see you smile
sometimes i can't laugh
because i miss you so much
sometimes i have to cry
because i need to hold you near
sometimes i get lost
because i need to feel your touch
sometimes i feel blessed
because god gave me you
sometimes i feel cursed
because he made me love you so much
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Re: sometimes i can't
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by Ineedanap on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 01:10:40 AM AEST
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Good write. It's easy to relate to because so many people go through this. What i've learned is to never depend on someone that heavily. You can love some one but never lose your individuality, it's what helps you get through the worst times of your life.
~Brooke |
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Re: sometimes i can't
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by sick_n_twisted on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 01:07:52 AM AEST
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this is exactly how i feel about a guy...i love reading poems about people relating to my feelings so i really love this write
Dee, |
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Re: sometimes i can't
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by ever1der on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 12:13:55 PM AEST
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| A agree with the above .. never allow yourself to be under someone else's control ..be yourself. nice write though. |
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