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my life
Contributed by
ashleigh4
on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the tears i cry- they taste so good
i taste them often, like i should.
the blood that trickles from my skin
i love that-is it such a sin
to relish pain, to to love it too?
or is this a weird thing to do?
the pain i feel from day to day
is undescribable-what can i say?
it's like a weight upon my heart,
it kills me, tears my skin apart.
my hours, minutes, days are numbered,
it's scary- my life is so encumbered.
God, if you are really there,
let me leave this great despair.
let me encounter the vein,
and let me end this horrendous pain.
Copyright ©
ashleigh4
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2003-01-21 13:20:00]
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Re: my life
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by wolfflow on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 01:33:26 PM AEST
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Re: my life
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by Patterz on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 03:11:37 PM AEST
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u know what? ur rite, it is like all your other poems...F**king INCREDIBLE! I wish i was half the "uncreative genius" you are. Keep writing, I'm always looking for your next poem...I've read 'em all and plan on reading every new one you put out. They are so deep and say exactly how I and I'm guessing you feel and i just wish i knew how to put pain to words like you can.
Keep it up super* and be strong
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Re: my life
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 08:47:11 PM AEST
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Ashleigh I agree this was like your other poems and it was awesome like all your other ones. I'm sure quite a few ppl including myself have felt like what u described in your poem. Keep your poems up and don't waste your talent.
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Re: my life
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by Cancer on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 09:55:24 PM AEST
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beautiful and painfully accurate.
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Re: my life
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by Delusions on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 11:04:13 PM AEST
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Awsome... this poem is beautifully written.. an so full of pain... keep it up... hope things get better for you...
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