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Clairvoyance
Contributed by
ChibiMiroku
on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 09:41:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Once were grown up
Once were mature
Are we still the same folks
That we once were?
Once we do away
With our dolls and toys
Can we still be
Those little girls and boys?
When were at school
And find we care
About what we do
And what we wear
When we don the cap
And wear the robe and gown
Weve acquiesced to our fates
And we cant back down
We shoot for the moon
We shoot for the stars
We concern ourselves
With jewels and cars
We look all around us
For something we know
For something from our past
For something from long ago
I suppose I can say
That I think its true
We are what we are
We do what we do
When we grow up
And begin anew
Keep in thought
In heart and mind
That Ill still be me
And youll still be you.
Copyright ©
ChibiMiroku
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2005-10-30 21:41:04]
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Re: Clairvoyance
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by Mangos on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 09:47:16 PM AEST
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These thoughts are profound. And considering your age I must say the way you conveyed them so artistically speaks to your clairvoyant abilities, if not then to your obvious talent. Keep up the thoughts, and the writing will always have meaningful content.
Great poem
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Re: Clairvoyance
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 09:49:14 PM AEST
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| i liked the rhythm most in this. you also had nice rhymes to accentuate that point of your poem. i liked the professionalism and style. now you can say a 16 year old likes it as well. =] |
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