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Intoxicating
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 12:40:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I wanna love you slow
touch you
feel you...
tease you until you moan
and your love flows.
I have waited my whole life
for this night,
Intoxicating.
Dreaming
of tasting your sweets
has me
drowning
in liquid fantasies.
you get me so high
forbidden pleasures are visualized
In my mind
of you and I.
Look into your eyes
and I am hypnotised
I kiss you and you sigh
hmm
ahh,
I wanna love you real slow
all night til you moan
and your love explodes.
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secretwind
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2005-10-31 00:40:18]
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Re: Intoxicating
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 12:51:07 AM AEST
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HMmmm aahhhhhhhhhhh.
Wo u could melt a stone cold rock with your flows. Mercy!
Luv, big huggs, awesome smiles,
emy |
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Re: Intoxicating
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by jheng on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 01:06:49 AM AEST
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| i love your poem. nice write |
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Re: Intoxicating
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 02:19:55 PM AEST
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This has a bit of a familiar ring to it :O
Sounds pretty intense, be it love or lust...You expressed your pent-up feelings well, and you really captured the mood. Good job!
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