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just cut deeper
Contributed by
mjh0813
on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 09:52:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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are you gonna finish what you started?
no i cant do it
but didnt you already cut?
come on do it more
you know you want to
it makes you feel better
yes but they think im crazy
ahh who cares what they think
its your body
come one just a little deeper
and then you'll be better
no i cant
you can
just give it a try
but im not ready to say goodbye
look they dont care about you
thats not true i know they do
no your wrong
they never wanted you
yes they did
i cant do it
im scared
dont be
you've cut deep before
show me how you did it
just pick up the blade
thats a good girl
now cut deeper
just like before
quit crying
your gonna be fine
but what if ..
what if what?
what if they miss me?
they wont
they'll be better off without you
yea i guess your right
thats my girl
are you ready?
yes i am
ok now take the blade and finish it
good girl
a little deeper and you'll be done with it
thats it
your my girl right?
yes im your girl
forever?
yes forever and always
thats good
look its done
its over
now follow me
your going to hell
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Re: just cut deeper
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by shadowmoon on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 10:19:05 AM AEST
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creepy. this is something even i have
srugled with. good wright. strong and
thought pervoking.
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Re: just cut deeper
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by onedysturbdchick on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 04:18:13 AM AEST
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| very sad.....but also a great poem. i deal with my own demons day after day, so i can totally relate |
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Re: just cut deeper
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by PureAmethyst on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 09:14:24 AM AEST
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| wow! i loved this, had to keep reading. Very sad and emotional but lots of detail. I love the questioning throughout the write and the way this girl seems to be talking to someone. Very well done with this. Keep up the great work :) x |
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