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Pat Yourself On The Back
Contributed by
coral
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Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 06:57:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Pat yourself on the back
Youre destroying her
She wants you to seek help
But you know better
Pat yourself on the back
Youve made her feel used
She knows too well
How it feels to be abused
Pat yourself on the back
Youre a champ at drinking beer
Every time you start at the pub
The guys give you a loud cheer
Pat yourself on the back
Youve done well
The bruises on her body
Have their own story to tell
Pat yourself on the back
The children fear you
If they tick you off
You beat them black and blue
Pat yourself on the back
Youre doing what your father used to
You swore youd never be like him
But youre doing everything you saw him do
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coral
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2005-10-31 18:57:12]
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Re: Pat Yourself On The Back
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 07:23:33 PM AEST
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Wow, there is a very good lesson in this poem. Well done! I need to read more of your work... I am sure many would be able to identify with this poem.
Welcome to YPDC..
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