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Ice Ballerina
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
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Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 07:59:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Ice Ballerina you dance in the darkness so far from the warmth of the light
Leaping and twirling your thoughts are all swirling you're lost in the chill of the night
There on the grass in the guise of a mortal on one toe see her pirouette
Gracefully gliding a tear she is hiding from hurt she will never forget
I watch her there 'neath the glow of the stars as her breath turns to fog in the cold
Barely I see but she won't notice me or my love that would never grow old
Standing in shadows I lower my eyes when she looks, for a moment, my way
Fearful she'll find in this so lonely mind all the feelings my words couldn't convey
If I were braver I'd dare to approach her and maybe the embers would glow
Fanning the fire with winds of desire that over our bodies would blow
Melting her heart into life giving waters refreshing two souls parched and dry
Alas she is frozen, her destiny chosen so I will just watch her and sigh
L. Carling c2005
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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Re: Ice Ballerina
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by Minus_Blindfold on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 08:05:30 PM AEST
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| Very good write. The title suits the meaning. ANd your words are very good |
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Re: Ice Ballerina
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 08:15:27 PM AEST
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Never fail to impress my good friend, As always
~Clark |
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Re: Ice Ballerina
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 08:26:08 PM AEST
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aw, Larry this was so loving and sweet. And masterfully
put together, as always. This somehow moved my
heart to an unimaginable place of beautiful wistfulness.
If the ink and quill are instruments, you are composing
symphanies that would humble Mozart.
Truly a pleasure to read your work.
~Breezy
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Re: Ice Ballerina
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by ever1der on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 08:35:04 PM AEST
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| My God This is Beautiful .. it would melt any ice goddess .. |
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Re: Ice Ballerina
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:53:09 AM AEST
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A true maserpiece.
Amazing |
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Re: Ice Ballerina
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:53:34 AM AEST
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| oops i mean masterpiece lol |
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Re: Ice Ballerina
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 05:42:47 PM AEST
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wow!! It is so good to have you back and posting again!!
Makes me want to yell "Go for it!!"
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Re: Ice Ballerina
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by Opium on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:12:51 AM AEST
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This is why I think twice befor ever stopping to write!. Looks like we both had our times away and now we're back :)
Great poem buddy, I still have alot of catching up to do on your latest unread poems. |
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Re: Ice Ballerina
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 11:32:15 PM AEST
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wow this was so beautifully penned and yet
almost overwhelmingly sad. I just loved this
very poetic... I'm gonna go read it somemore
keep up the awesome writing Larry.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Ice Ballerina
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 05:33:11 AM AEST
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Larry, this was so beautiful and sad at the same time. Your words are lovely as well as the rhming.
Like Jecks said its good to see you back with us.
Jane` |
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Re: Ice Ballerina
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by slogan on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 04:29:26 PM AEST
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| I really like this piece of work.. good job..jh |
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