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Trick or Trick
Contributed by
Jyssvw
on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 08:45:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Toilet paper hung from trees
Cake batter
Splattered on the concrete
Shaving cream
Slutty nurses
Champagin rooms
Two many options
Gets me claustrophobic
If your anorexic
It sure doesnt show it
And the monster hanging all over you
Sure does know it
For my sake
I hope they blow it
The massacred of eye screwing in the closet
Carved pumpkins
Wimpy musicians
Head on collisions
Rash decisions
With consequences
There is no intermission
No recess from your senses
Just go with your best guesses
And gather what you can from coincidences
This is not your castle
There are no princesses
Except her, on the counter
Waiving her wand
A crown for her alter
A clown who knows now better
On the ground the piles litter
The gutter is closed
The parade shoots down the road
Transvestites in drag
Or so I was told
The young boy rots his teeth
On candy he wasnt supposed to eat
The plethora of sugar handed to the ADD
Has got them all in an uproar of hidden cures to HIV
Or the answers to juvenile delinquency
Dressed like a fool you can be as smart as you want to be
Eggs thrown from the sixteenth story balcony
Cracking sixteen feet in front of me
Hitting the nose of a passing by old lady
Wheeling her cart, from the market where she shopped
Oddly
For toilet paper, shaving cream and candy
They should stop laughing, this isnt funny
Or amusing
Conversely, quite disrupting
To the flow of the winds in the evening
A glow that I must be receiving
In heavy traffic a taxi cab winding and weaving
Headed for the next red light
And now Im heaving
Vomiting
From the pit of my stomach
Because the grit that surrounds it
Now that I think about it
I must have been dreaming or I would have found it
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Jyssvw
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2005-10-31 20:45:48]
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Re: Trick or Trick
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 08:55:11 PM AEST
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Sounds as if one of the image muses has visited you as well. Nice going! I'm sure it's going to take several readings to grasp the whole thing, but well worth the effort. "No recess from your senses." - now there's a truth I haven't seen lately, but yeah.
Good write! Keep it up!
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Re: Trick or Trick
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 04:36:44 AM AEST
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Hey,
Sexc imagery
I loved it
Im not shure if that’s wat u were aiming for
But then again I have a warped sense of…. Well just warped senses
But that was damn sxc!!!
Thanx!!!
Till next time
Emz
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Re: Trick or Trick
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 05:12:12 AM AEST
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Shazaaammmmmmmmmmm,
what a write!
Well tell ya what, didn't know we waz dremin but I didn't find it yet either.
Very creative writer u r.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Trick or Trick
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:38:01 AM AEST
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I'm betting this is a moment caught in time..on Halloween..in the life of jyss...
It's what makes it such a brilliant collection of words..
People don't understand that
you're ahead of your time my friend...
Perhaps someday...you'll be understood.
I felt ya all night long:
"Carved pumpkins
Wimpy musicians
Head on collisions
Rash decisions
With consequences
There is no intermission"
and...
"The plethora of sugar handed to the ADD
Has got them all in an uproar of hidden cures to HIV
Or the answers to juvenile delinquency
Dressed like a fool you can be as smart as you want to be"
Love these words..
Yours Truly..and Truly Again-
Billy
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Re: Trick or Trick
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:53:29 AM AEST
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Well, this is quite the 'ran on my parade' write, now isn't it? I won't go long-winded on this comment, but the imagery was phenomenal. Nice!
Scorp. |
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