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Bruises
Contributed by
Evening_Star
on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 07:04:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Why are you so mean to me?
I try so hard to make you happy
And all you do is make me cry
I try not to get angry with you
I try to just forget about the
Mean words you say to me
And the bruises on my body
I don't try to dwell on what's happened
And I still can't help but love you
Every day a new word adds insult to injury
I am afraid that one day I won't be
The same loving person I used to be
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Evening_Star
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2005-11-01 19:04:49]
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Re: Bruises
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by MG_Akela22090 on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 09:36:24 PM AEST
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| Story of my life! You speak words I cannot express....oh this is sooo good! Keep writing!!!! I love it... |
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Re: Bruises
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by justjasmine on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 02:05:01 PM AEST
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| been there, done that, still wearing the t-shirt....:-( |
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Re: Bruises
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by ginnginn11 on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 07:56:15 PM AEST
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| i really like it...short but really well put into words. |
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Re: Bruises
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by Love_love_kyo on
Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 12:16:29 PM AEST
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| *hugs* If you want to stay that same loving person for the one who will eventually come along into your life who deserves it....get out now. |
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Re: Bruises
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 07:02:44 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel except in my situation, they don't use words to hurt me they use actions. they don't reply to my email so I don't know whether they still want to associated with me. I liked them alot yet I want to let them go. but I can't. Anyway, This was an excellent poem, keep up the good work! |
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Re: Bruises
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by trulovaAKAthetruth on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 03:38:41 AM AEST
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GREAT POST SOMETIMES
WORDS DONT HAVE TO SPEAK
BRUISES SAID ENOUGH
TO MAKE ME THINK WITH OUT YOU HAVING TO SPEAK I GUESS THATS
WHAT GOOD VERSE WAS MENT 2 BE
THANKS FOR ALLOWING YOUR SELF TO BE FREE
I SEND LOVE AND PEACE
THOMAS WAYNE HART JR
A.K.A.
LUV
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Re: Bruises
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by Fairiepsycho on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 10:10:05 PM AEST
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| I know how that feels, minus the physical bruises. But words can hurt just as much as a fist to the face can. This is a good write, keep it up! |
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