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More Than a Falling Potted Plant
Contributed by
chibimiroku
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Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 11:37:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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It hit me like a ton of bricks.
There was no way of to choose;
My brain and I were playing pick-up sticks
And my brain was abotu to lose.
I have achieved so much
But I've also lost it all;
With a sudden implosion of wisdom
My erudite tower began to fall.
Inscrutable, Impenetrable,
Was the masive wall before me
Unyielding, Undeniable
Was the thrust of the force behind me.
Floating in a shifting rainbow
Of lights, colors, sounds and waves,
Apollo's arrow brings me absurdly low,
For none of my knowledge could I save.
I dont comprehend anything anymore
Shut to me now, is Knowledge's door;
All I once knew, I now abhor;
I'm playing the game of my life
And I don't even know the score.
Nothing mattered so much before...
Nothing, until into my life, Reality tore.
Copyright ©
chibimiroku
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2005-11-01 23:37:24]
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Re: More Than a Falling Potted Plant
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 11:43:25 PM AEST
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I loved the ending.
(The rest wasn't at all bad either)
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Re: More Than a Falling Potted Plant
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 12:29:47 AM AEST
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I've missed reading your work. this is great. Interesting and captivating at the same time. Keep at it. I can see you going a long way with your writing. Well done.
*hugs*
sue
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