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the door of your house
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 12:58:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I walk down this dark empty street
not sure why, not sure how I got here
but I keep walking anyways
images of you run threw my head
I wonder if you ever wonder where I am
or wonder how I am
I wonder what are you doing
and who your thinking of
I see this bright light up ahead
I quickly run to it
its a house
with you in it
your not alone
your with her
I see you and her together
comfortable on the couch
as I look at you from outside
I start to wonder why you dont like me
as I walked down that dark empty street
I dont know how I got there
or where I was
but some how I ended up
at the door of your house...
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sick_n_twisted
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2005-11-02 00:58:20]
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Re: the door of your house
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:40:05 AM AEST
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A rather sad and emotional write. I feel there is more to this poem though. I hope all is well with you. A great write. Thanks for sharing it.
*hugs*
Sue |
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Re: the door of your house
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 05:20:20 AM AEST
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| Very good I really like the way all your feelings are here, it helps to put your feelings into words, xxx |
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Re: the door of your house
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 10:12:16 PM AEST
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This was a very interesting write indeed! I wonder were you dreaming? I've had dreams like this before.......I liked where you took me, the trip was intriquing, and I liked the form of your write also.
Very good job!
Thanks so much for sharing
Warm love
consue |
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Re: the door of your house
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by angel_eyes70 on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 02:36:17 PM AEST
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Umm is this something that really happened? Or like a dream? Lol, but umm whos this one about?:p Haha Well great write Dee!!
xxxKimxxx |
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