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Hopeless?
Contributed by
Without_Hope
on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 11:51:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Darkness covers the once bright sky,
And rain falls, the goddess's tears.
I wish I could spread my wings and fly,
Fly away from pain, away from fears.
Alone, I know, I'm supposed to be,
A flicker in the corner of an eye.
I will never grace anybody's memory,
My life, it seems, an inevitable lie.
Premonitions flicker threw my mind,
A curse upon me, my heart and soul.
A way to stop their tragety, I cannot find,
While time goes onward toward its goal.
My tears will fall upon red grass,
As I watch them grow lifeless and cold.
Not stopped, the events will come to pass,
I wont be helpless, wont let death unfold.
I wont watch helpless, not this time,
To strong I felt a visions pain.
I wont let them fall victim of this crime,
I wont allow them to fall cold, slain.
I stand my ground against doubts now,
And search forever to find them all.
And never again to defeat will I bow.
And together with them we will all stand tall.
Copyright ©
Without_Hope
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2005-11-02 23:51:33]
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Re: Hopeless?
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 01:00:07 AM AEST
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| Very good! I like the turn around at the end |
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Re: Hopeless?
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 03:06:17 AM AEST
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hey,
do u really have premonitions?
I have a frend like that
really good write
till next time
emz |
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Re: Hopeless?
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by P0rNStAr on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 07:09:46 AM AEST
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Premonitions can suck.. but can also be a warning.. I believe that we make the paths for our lives.. Good write Ended well ^^
x .TC. x |
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Re: Hopeless?
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by brew on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:08:37 AM AEST
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Yes premotions, can be bad.! Just try and make them GO AWAY!. Sometimes, they are not what we really think it is we need.! Be strong to all...........Keep the head up and try something, new.! Good Write
Brew~ |
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Re: Hopeless?
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 02:58:28 AM AEST
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| wow very good write on this poem... welcome to YPDC. |
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