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Battered Pride
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I am reaching out to you,
But you're pushing me away,
I am trying to help you through,
So why don't you let me stay?
I can see your battered pride,
Swaying in the wind.
Why don't you come inside?
I won't leave you pinned.
You are a beautiful being,
That society pushed to fast,
I see your courage fleeing,
Now you think that it's the last.
Bruised and broken,
Hurts unspoken,
Try to forgive,
So you can live,
Let me inside,
Please don't hide.
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yellow_sundragon
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2003-01-21 23:40:00]
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Re: Battered Pride
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 02:05:15 AM AEST
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| Words straight from the heart ... sign of a true friend. |
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Re: Battered Pride
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by ravenblack_phoenix on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 02:43:51 PM AEST
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| I agree with Tanna's comment, this is touching. |
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