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All About Me
Contributed by
JenJen
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Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 12:34:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If only you could just see,
What it's like to be me.
The pain and the confusion,
My joy is just an illusion.
Behind these tearful eyes,
I cannot carry anymore lies.
If only you could just see,
What it's like to be me.
Copyright ©
JenJen
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2005-11-03 12:34:38]
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Re: All About Me
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 01:50:55 PM AEST
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| this is a really great write..thats my oppinion...it was expressed really well. thank you for posting it.. |
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Re: All About Me
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by SkillzWayAboveYours on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 01:55:15 PM AEST
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| Good write, write some more though |
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Re: All About Me
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by Evening_Star on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 04:00:16 PM AEST
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good write. I like the message that it carries you definitely get your point across.
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Re: All About Me
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by poisonpen00ad on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:26:11 AM AEST
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This is a great poem and so well put. You express the power of your emotions so well here. Great work.
C. |
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Re: All About Me
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by XxXMcCathyXxX on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:17:27 AM AEST
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| YAY!! Jeni you got it up, you already know my opioion...opinion IT'S SUPER GOOD!! ^__^ keep the good work!! |
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