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I Ask
Contributed by
Shade_
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Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 03:25:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I ask that
I may walk upon plates of glass
To glimpse a prancing drift
As to linger there
Within a reflection
Ceaselessly bound to my gaze
Tenderly afloat
By invisible string and wire
Swaying gently so stillness
Can sleep
And that I may ask once more
Copyright ©
Shade_
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2005-11-03 15:25:12]
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Re: I Ask
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 03:59:26 PM AEST
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A short, but rather intriguing piece of poetry you have here. I love the images you cast into your readers head. So much can be said in so little words. Well done.
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Re: I Ask
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by strider on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 10:48:51 AM AEST
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Clap, Clap, Clap
Fantastic piece, Loved it totally.
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