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Mysterious Thoughts
Contributed by
poisonpen00ad
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Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:16:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When it comes to
fireflies and vampires
nothing is as it seems.
Could it be
chaos or cosmos?
Which one fills your dreams?
The beautiful
children and flowers
require more than seed.
It seems
Anath and government
ride the same steed.
Neither
doctors or saints
can stop this growing disease.
Both
Cortez and Quezacotl
demand a steep fee.
In the end
seppuku or execution
with both you must bleed.
Only in understanding
butterflies and dragons
can you truly be free...
Copyright ©
poisonpen00ad
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2005-11-03 23:16:25]
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Re: Mysterious Thoughts
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:50:54 PM AEST
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| ha ha! I like it! |
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Re: Mysterious Thoughts
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:52:24 AM AEST
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Wow I really like your poem. Sue *sighs* ah yes insomnia I can so much relate. An absolutely sensational write. 5 stars for you.
*hugs*
sue |
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Re: Mysterious Thoughts
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by ever1der on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:11:36 PM AEST
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| wonderful write .. seppuku or execution ... interesting thoughts... |
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Re: Mysterious Thoughts
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by Desolated_Denial on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:14:19 PM AEST
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It's amazing. I like the comparisions.
"Only in understanding
butterflies and dragons
can you truly be free..."
I love that line ...
It can apply to anything; universal |
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