|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Titleless
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 12:53:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
|
Shes more than just a messed up girl
So much more but no one tries to see
How brilliant she really is
And all the things she can e
They cant even tell that shes
That she is a cutter with scars on the out side
And so much pain on the in
She feels like there is something wrong with her
But there is nothing wrong
But no one tries to see past that
Hopeless and sad look on her face
No cares or so she thinks
The ones that do never want to show
They can learn a lot from her
If the tried to see that
Shes more than beautiful on the inside
More than brilliant more than hurting
Enough so that it shows on the out side
Her scars, they just make her human
Humans hurt and when the do they cry
When they feel like her, like us
It is hard not to just break down
I cant see why she feels so ugly or nasty
When she is beautiful even when she cries
Some times more so because it shows
That she feels something and is not afraid
To show it, well to show me
Shes a cutter but she hides it well
There is almost no way to tell
But if you look deep enough you can see
That she is the only one who knows
How deep she really has to cut
To feel something else
She cuts so deep sometimes
Through her skin into mine
Deeper and deeper
Till the blades at my soul
Copyright ©
Doriens_Picture
... [
2005-11-04 00:53:43]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Titleless
(User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 03:24:46 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
woah....so good...and hit a sore spot for me right now...like on my left side......john you're an amazing writer...
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
|
|
Re: Titleless
(User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 09:27:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| you are an amazing writer john, this shows a lot of emothion, i can tell you care about her, great job. |
|
|
Re: Titleless
(User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 04:07:24 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a very powerful poem. shes lucky to have a friend like u.
xXx |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
