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The first is mine
Contributed by
rickshaw
on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 10:34:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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When it comes
to me and women,
I'm in the water
but I ain't swimmin'
I'm sinking man
I am sinking fast
Too much pillin'
led to too much chillin'
and it left my willin'
at half mast.
When it comes
it comes in threes
Women can sense
when you're not at ease
when you're too uptight
to even tease
It's like you've got
a contagious disease
When it comes
it's gonna be so fine
Gonna take photos
and my time
Gonna treat her good
the second time
But the first
the first is mine
Copyright ©
rickshaw
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2005-11-04 10:34:24]
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Re: The first is mine
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by ever1der on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:36:15 PM AEST
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| um...er... cute. LOL |
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Re: The first is mine
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Monday, 16th August 2010 @ 07:12:56 PM AEST
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| I agree totally with the 'um...er' bit above. |
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