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|| The Invisible Blow By An Invincible Hand ||
Contributed by
Desolated_Denial
on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:07:17 PM in AEST
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I fell down today.
The pain didn't feel real.
The sting singed from the outside.
But I only cried on the inside.
I fell down today.
I thought it would feel worse.
It didn't.
In fact, I didn't feel it at all.
I feel weak today.
They all tell me to be strong.
The invisible blow, from an invincible hand.
It only made me weaker.
I didn't fall today.
I fell.
It wasn't physical,
but the bruises are still there.
I think i'll fall tomorrow.
What can I do?
I need better support...
... I'm too close to the ground to see.
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Desolated_Denial
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2005-11-04 13:07:17]
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Re: || The Invisible Blow By An Invincible Hand ||
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 02:54:40 PM AEST
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...I'm too close to the ground to see.
brilliant.keep writing! |
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