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Shadow of a Soul
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 12:13:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Die to live
live to die
when you don't exist
it doesn't matter.
Reach for me,
rip me out of this dream
and teach me to be real.
My porcelain face
pained blank with blood.
Smash me.
Crack this mask.
Let my heart leak out.
Passions can't be touched
when you drift,
a mere shadow of a soul.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2005-11-05 12:13:42]
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Re: Shadow of a Soul
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by hellsfallenangel on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 12:54:36 PM AEST
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this is a really good write i really liked it ttyl bye
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Re: Shadow of a Soul
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 12:57:10 PM AEST
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Very good write, a lot of people tend to wear a mask, to protect others - themselves, from reality, or pain. A very emotion felt poem, I enjoyed reading.
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Re: Shadow of a Soul
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 11:49:34 PM AEST
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Nice write. Deep well written
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Re: Shadow of a Soul
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by PoisonousPyscho on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 09:32:24 PM AEST
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I really like it, and I remember you, I used to read all your poems and I was a big fan, remember me?! comment more later...
Love Always,
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Re: Shadow of a Soul
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 11:10:59 PM AEST
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Short and to the point a very strong write and
one that I enjoy and can relate to very much. I
just loved it all and nothing more needed to
be said. Thanks for sharing this.
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