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Can You?
Contributed by
wolfgirl211
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Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 07:35:45 PM in AEST
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Can you hear the earth crying?
Crying for what it has lost
Can you hear the creatures' battle cries
To win at any cost
Can you hear the bitter melody?
Lament of a magic forgotten by man
Can you hear the cry of death?
The bullet shot from mankinds' hand
Can you hear their screams?
As they fall to human guns...
Can you hear the mother wolf weeping?
Mourning her sons
Can you hear the sounds of battle?
The clashing clink of swords
Can you hear man fight man?
As they stupidly wage war
Can you see the fire burning?
On the torches, in their eyes
Can you see the hatred growing?
Each time a creature dies
Can you see the dying forest?
The trees which once stood tall
Can you see where you've gone wrong?
For wealth man killed it all
Can you see the world fall apart?
Being ripped at the faulty seams
Can you see the illusion crumble?
As you count your broken dreams
Can you see a brighter future?
Can you sew this world together?
Can you feel the peace restored?
Let's keep that peace forever
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Re: Can You?
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by BigDaddy on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 08:04:47 PM AEST
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I enjoyed your poem very much! You put a lot of thought and vision which helps the reader to gain perspective on the world and the impact humankind has on it.
Thank you for sharing it! |
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Re: Can You?
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by tears_of_blood on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 08:32:57 PM AEST
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| good poem keep it up |
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Re: Can You?
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by OzChick on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 11:10:10 PM AEST
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| Yes I can. The world is in trouble and it is each indevidual's responsability to do what we can to effect a posative change. This is a brilliant poem, well written with good rhythm and rhyme. Well done. |
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Re: Can You?
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 12:15:52 AM AEST
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Wow Nice write. Really good flow and usage of word vision. Thanks for sharing.
Be looking for more .
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Re: Can You?
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by guiltycircles on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 03:58:47 AM AEST
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| what an awesome way to comment on society, well written and so relevant, well done |
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Re: Can You?
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by memories_mist on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 06:10:25 PM AEST
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| Nicely done, thank your friend for the encouragement for you to post, I really enjoyed reading this and letting it create visions to accompany it. |
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