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You say, I say
Contributed by
memories_mist
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Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 05:24:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
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you say you still hate me,
that's ok I hate you too....
you say you got a new love,
that's ok I got one better then you......
you say you really love her,
we all know that's a lie...
you say you want to marry her,
I say go ahead and try.....
you say you cant wait,
I say I hope she can....
you say it didnt work,
I say I told you so...
you say you want another chance,
that's when I say goodbye.......
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Re: You say, I say
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 07:03:16 AM AEST
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| i like this one, it has a nice flow to it and is written great. |
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Re: You say, I say
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by JenJen on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:55:49 AM AEST
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| wow i enjoyed reading this poem....it had a nice pace to it...i know its hard to loss the one you love but youll get over it and writing is the best way to put it behind you... |
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Re: You say, I say
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by tiggytom on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 10:13:58 AM AEST
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| same as above, it has a nice steady flow, you've said what you've needed to say xxx |
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