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He's Gone
Contributed by
PoisonousPyscho
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Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 09:16:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hes Gone
He sits there alone
Cold and confused
He is free of the sickness
The torment and abuse
Hes hiding from the darkness
Sheltered by the light
Hes lost in his own world
So filled with fright
He watched his whole world
Fall deep into despair
He thought of only one thing
And he realized how much she didnt care
So as he watched the lights fade
And sunrise turn to dusk
He said his goodbyes to his world
And he became lost in the dust
By: Ren R. Gemme
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PoisonousPyscho
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2005-11-06 21:16:55]
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Re: He's Gone
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 09:40:17 PM AEST
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You weave the words into a poetic syrup that flows onto the page and entrances the reader. How do you do it? You truely have talent. Kudos!
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Re: He's Gone
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by BEBE on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 10:04:52 PM AEST
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I loved how you wrote this, very nice job
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Re: He's Gone
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by tears_of_blood on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 01:20:12 AM AEST
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| good poem you used all the right words they make you feel every thing keep it up. |
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Re: He's Gone
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by mrpeanut64 on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 05:13:36 PM AEST
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| nice write |
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