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~Inspiration for my Friend~
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 04:20:00 AM in AEST
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Break out the candles and light the fires
see into your soul and of your desires,
gaze upon beautiful sunsetts and breathe
into your lungs the enchanted unseen,
May this poem be a gentle breeze across
your life and pen that you did toss,
close your eyes now and see a far
alas away dreams and shine of stars,
Charm the pants off mars and the moon
and your mind will move and very soon,
'tis the way of life's passage nothing more
am always here won't close the door,
Bid fare thee well the daily cares
go on outside for charmingly needed air,
something crisp and fresh and free
close your eyes and think of the azure seas..
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2003-01-22 04:20:00]
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Re: ~Inspiration for my Friend~
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 06:11:20 AM AEST
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Very good write my friend.
Tttooootttaaalllllyy aaaaaweessoomme!!
Thank you so much for your very kind comments on my writes, especially the last one!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy
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Re: ~Inspiration for my Friend~
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 06:39:45 AM AEST
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| Azure sea..o god ! Go near it, it t will roar in your heart..any way. this is a very beautiful poem..like the sky at sunset and like a gentle breeze..it hugs the heart. ..venkat |
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Re: ~Inspiration for my Friend~
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:09:38 AM AEST
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| Nessa, how sweet and elegant are the words, straight from your heart, beautifully written, thanks for sharing |
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Re: ~Inspiration for my Friend~
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by Jessica_Saini on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 09:58:32 AM AEST
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This is a very beautiful poem. It is so gentle, and also kind of mystical. I really enoyed it:-)
~Jessica |
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Re: ~Inspiration for my Friend~
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 10:26:57 AM AEST
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How very beautiful Nessa and I can relate to this one so well. You write with such soul
Fondest love
Chrissie x |
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Re: ~Inspiration for my Friend~
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 01:49:15 PM AEST
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| This is a very pretty write Nessa. I enjoyed reading it. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: ~Inspiration for my Friend~
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by springchic1979 on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 04:29:51 PM AEST
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That was a really beautiful poem Nessa, it did inspire me to find my pen again. I thank you with all my heart.
With Love,
Yvonne |
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