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You Helped Me Soar
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:01:04 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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You Helped Me Soar
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When Im blue
I come to you
You help me soar
Right off the floor
You hold the string as I fly
To ensure I dont get too high
Yet when I tumble to the ground
Youre the first one around
To pick me up by my wings
To repair all broken things
You release the beauty that I hide
By showing off my insides
You gently reel me in
When the air becomes too thin
My protector you seem to be
Always looking out for me
Though I have little to offer back
Your friendship never seems to lack
So I soar through the sky
Because youve given me air to fly
Thank you!
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2005-11-07 08:01:04]
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Re: You Helped Me Soar
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:04:03 AM AEST
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A very nice tribute, seems like a good friend you have. I think everyone needs that person, the one, that picks us up and dusts us off. Geat write, I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: You Helped Me Soar
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by moon_light on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:06:15 AM AEST
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| everyone need some one and oneday you can help that person. |
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Re: You Helped Me Soar
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by she_smiles on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:54:45 AM AEST
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| Your poem is so touching! What a blessing to have such a caring and close relationship as that. Poem well done, not to mention good rhythm, flow, and rhyme. Take care :) |
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Re: You Helped Me Soar
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by n2dep2care on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:52:19 AM AEST
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Vivid and real imagery , very well done. Beautiful work.
Laurie |
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Re: You Helped Me Soar
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by GingerB on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 03:48:21 PM AEST
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love your poem, JSM. I am becoming quite a fan of yours.
Ginny |
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