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I'm Sorry....I Wish I Could Have Lied
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Under moonlights gaze she sits alone,lost in screaming thoughts
How could she turn away a love that this man ,to her has brought
Stepping forward from the shadows,he spoke so softly to her heart
And she took the smile he so casually wore, and tore it all apart
Now he feels alone again left with nothing but remnannts of his smile
Regretting the story of his heart,for the pain of truth was not worthwhile
He ,in his deepest sadness,her in a state of quiet guilt
Though worlds apart,they secretly know,true love they could have built
Yet his heart belongs to another and hers is lost somewhere in space
Two souls forever searching for their final resting place
Not heaven as we know it,more a paradise on earth
Where lovers join in heart and soul,and for eternity...give birth
Creating all that's wonderous,a kaleidascope of colours bright
Under love's protective blanket,safe from the loneliness of night...
Deep soulful sighs pass through her lips,to meet the warm nights air
As the moonlight tries to soothe her,dancing through her hair
Towards the window,she slowly walks,and pulls the drapes aside
And to the stars she sheds a tear and wishes she could have lied
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-01-22 06:20:00]
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Re: I'm Sorry....I Wish I Could Have Lied
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 07:56:15 AM AEST
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| The moonlight ..dancing through her hair..Hey ..Your whispers are very sweet..whether they are truths are lies..I dont bother. Let me hear more..venkat |
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Re: I'm Sorry....I Wish I Could Have Lied
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 05:28:35 PM AEST
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| Woooowwwwww! I absolutely adore this poem ... I am speechless. |
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Re: I'm Sorry....I Wish I Could Have Lied
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 10:34:03 PM AEST
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| It's funny...I read this, and it's as if I know you! ;o) You already know how much I love this poem . Roses at your feet... Larry :o) |
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Re: I'm Sorry....I Wish I Could Have Lied
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 11:19:22 PM AEST
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regret beautifully put...a wonderful piece...bravo
rosie |
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Re: I'm Sorry....I Wish I Could Have Lied
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:25:05 AM AEST
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Wow this was beautiful... I have been torn apart by many girls who have torn to shreds my feelings for them. They all said I was a great friend... but now there not my friends any more. Anway great poem so much feeling and heartache.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: I'm Sorry....I Wish I Could Have Lied
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 12:46:34 AM AEST
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| The truth does hurt, does it not? You have expressed that so well in this piece. |
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