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'LOOK INSIDE YOURSELF''
Contributed by
Jerard
on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 07:54:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Darkness fills around you makeing you in
fright, but always in side you there is an
even greater light, that will help light the
way on the path of destiny when your falling
through the passing days of your life.
Copyright ©
Jerard
... [
2005-11-07 19:54:58]
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Re: 'LOOK INSIDE YOURSELF''
(User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:04:42 PM AEST
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I like the poem, just not so much the format. And try un-capitalizing the title, it doesn't fit the poem and it makes it seemalot more wild and rowdy than it is.
Really nice though, =)
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