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Face in the Mirror.
Contributed by
Zanobia
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Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:23:57 PM in AEST
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One night, I found myself deep in sleep,
Dreaming of somone who would resuce me from life, and sweep me away,
but in a snap i was in another dream,
i was in one room with two mirrors
then in another with people lined up and down,
i was back in the room with two mirrors alone,
first i look into one mirror, i see me, fat ugly me, the outside me
then i look into the next, and i see a beautiful me, the inside,
i wonder which counts the most, outside or in?
which do you care more, inside or out?
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Re: Face in the Mirror.
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by Live2Die on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:28:23 PM AEST
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The middle kind of confused me, but I really love the ending, and I can sympathize with it well. It's an amazing question, and I would have to say the inside you, sometimes it just takes people awhile to see through the outside.
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Re: Face in the Mirror.
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by memories_mist on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:38:43 PM AEST
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| A very nice question to ponder. Personally I choose what lies within, unfortunately much of the population is out for that 'barbie and ken' look. Thankfully, we all can beat our drums to our own path. Take Care! |
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Re: Face in the Mirror.
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by Zanobia on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:44:58 PM AEST
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| i was lost in the middle too, it just flowed so i put it, i care about he inside too. |
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Re: Face in the Mirror.
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by hoist1atca on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 10:30:59 PM AEST
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Seemed a bit harsh on yourself-
If you show your inner bueaty to others then that is what they will see on the outside-
I stood before my own reflection and saw the monster within me, the same monster that others saw-
This made me ugly both inside and out-
Take care...
Joe |
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Re: Face in the Mirror.
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by deathbringer on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 10:56:13 PM AEST
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| most people care for the outside therefore they don't see the inside.Others care for the inside and ignore the outside.But i think there must be a ballance between the outside and the inside.You can't have a beautiful inside and an ugly outside couse in the end your mind reflects on the body and if you have a beautiful mind your body will just follow the same "line".I think i answered the question but forgot to comment on the poem.Well ... it happenes from time to time. |
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