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Your gone
Contributed by
nannerz
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Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:35:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I tried to be perfect
to set a good example
someone for you
to look up to.
I guess I failed
I changed for you
but your gone again
Will I see you again?
will you even bother to call
My world crumbled
when the cops pulled up
I knew what happend
I knew I wont be seeing you
I failed you
I promised
I would keep you safe
and out of harms way
Now your gone
I have nothing to prove
slowly
Im falling in a pit
I dont know
if Ill return
Copyright ©
nannerz
... [
2005-11-07 21:35:13]
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Re: Your gone
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by Live2Die on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:40:48 PM AEST
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Ouch. Emotional. Heartfelt. I hope you have the strength to get through this, and if you don't, pull some from the people here.
Nice write though,
~ Rissa |
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Re: Your gone
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by memories_mist on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:43:18 PM AEST
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| You said just enough to get your point across very nice write. I hope this works out for you in the end. |
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Re: Your gone
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 10:31:41 PM AEST
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so deep with emotions in this.
you did well.
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Re: Your gone
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by dark_fighter_chick on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:38:02 PM AEST
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| maybe its because i'm menstral, but thats a tear jerker. your poem was really nice. |
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