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What I Know
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 05:54:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I found a mountain
I learnt about its heart
The tears of its rudeness
Its deep pain
Its magestic sumptuosity
I found a forest
Punished by its aggressivity
Hardened by the time
Outraged by silent nomads
So lost, So insecure
I saw the sea
Its beautiful immensity
Its revolt
Its painful murmur, Its farewell song
I learnt the heat that carries the sun
And its overflowing light
I learnt about the secrets of the clouds
And its prodigious power
I learnt so much, so much more
And Yet
I know nothing
Of me
By Fernanda F. Rocha
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Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2005-11-08 05:54:15]
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Re: What I Know
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by enigma on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 06:50:49 AM AEST
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Ladymoon...
...why were we shackled with this dimension called time...you create so timelessly...I enter a timeless dimension when I read your work, but upon coming to my senses I experience a head-on collision with time and all of its responsibilities...
...a beautifully worded path through a landscape of external discovery only to find that the path leads to our own front door...
...in an hour and fifteen minutes, my students will pour through this other responsibility drenched door...I must be prepared for them...
bye...
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Re: What I Know
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by enigma on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 06:52:43 AM AEST
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ladymoon,
I Loved it! I don't think I told you that...or, perhaps I did...anyway, now I know I have...
got to go...
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Re: What I Know
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 06:54:46 AM AEST
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| always a sweet Gentleman :) thank You enigma ! |
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Re: What I Know
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by poisonpen00ad on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 08:47:43 PM AEST
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This is truely beautiful. Very powerful. The only complaint I have is the use of learnt insted of learned. I think it takes away from the intelligence of this masterpiece. But what do I know? I love it anyway.
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