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When Sorry Isn't Enough
Contributed by
memories_mist
on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 10:11:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I wakeup in the morning to a cold and lonely bed,
thoughts of our conversation still linger in my head.
All the What if's come rushing back into play,
should I have saved the truth for another day.
We both said so many things, we got off track,
Now I lie here thinking how I can get you back.
I made your heart bleed, did I call your bluff,
Will a simple apology be just enough.
A door slams shut, what brought you back,
you slam things around as you begin to pack.
I beg for forgiveness, words flow from within,
you stand back and stare at me like I didnt even
begin.
Hate-filled eyes burn through me, I fill with fright,
How do I make this right.
Glass shatters above me tears flow down my cheeks,
what has he done, I lay there in blood-soaked sheets.
The smell of dirt surrounds me, my lungs hard to fill,
I stare up at him, is this all for real.
Everything goes dark and I'm all alone again.
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memories_mist
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2005-11-08 10:11:31]
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Re: When Sorry Isn't Enough
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 11:55:37 AM AEST
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| a very sad but powerful write |
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Re: When Sorry Isn't Enough
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 12:06:27 PM AEST
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| i had visual images of this happening. This has such power to make such vivid imagery...you are truly talented :) |
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Re: When Sorry Isn't Enough
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by Kazzy1231 on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 12:35:41 PM AEST
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| Nice write,Please check out some of my poems! |
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