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no control
Contributed by
hearts4pain
on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 10:24:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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life.
i have no control
my emotions power over me
problems, situations, sickness death, separation.
i have no control
anger, madness, hatred, bitterness, cold, lonely, sad, depression.
i have no control
regrets, pain, hurt, love, crying.
i have no control
eating, sleeping, exercise, cutting, overdose.
i have control
living, dying.
i have control
i have control
i have control
behavior.
i have no self control
i am scared
wont you show me the way?
please, please take control
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Re: no control
(User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 11:53:27 AM AEST
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| great work, i like ur style |
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Re: no control
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 12:03:42 PM AEST
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this is a different style.. I love it though. its so direct and seems soooo forcefull.
well done this is a great piece of work!
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