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hoping it's real, just so it can end
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 11:50:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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just sitting here, praying
that it's not just a dream
that everything truely is
exactly as it seems
hoping all this pain is real
and that it's not just in my head
hoping that i am alive
so that i can be dead
but if this is a nightmare
that just won't go away
then i'll be stuck like this forever
and in this hellhold i will stay
if, in truth, i am alive
that means that i can die
that means i can just end it all
and no more will i cry
so please, I'm begging you
tell me it's not just a dream
that everything truely is
exactly the way it seems
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xXxmegsxXx
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2005-11-08 11:50:58]
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Re: hoping it's real, just so it can end
(User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 05:10:43 PM AEST
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I’m glad you posted on my write so I could
be the first to post on this write. This write
was very well done and it flows so well. It
does have emotions and it asks the same
questions that go through my head from time
to time. Life feels so hard sometimes and it
only feels like a dreams that you which you
could end. Life is what it seems though event
when you wish it wasn’t or you wish it was.
Take care and keep up the writes and know
that it was a great read that really drew me
in….Steve |
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