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Broken
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
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Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 05:50:27 PM in AEST
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i gave everything i had
and you took it all
now feeling used and abused
lying on the floor
i cry myself to sleep
until my eyes wont cry anymore
you reached deep into my soul
and tore my heart out
left me on the ground
broken
crying
bleeding
dieing
Copyright ©
SmileSkinDeep
... [
2005-11-08 17:50:27]
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Re: Broken
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 06:26:30 PM AEST
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a short but hurtful write i hope things get better
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Re: Broken
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by hellsfallenangel on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 07:10:36 PM AEST
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| this is very good but very sad hope things work out |
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Re: Broken
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by Pisces101 on
Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 02:02:50 AM AEST
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| you know, most of the time i dread writing or even reading things that are this blundt and "in your face" about how terrible one person can make you feel. but i read this, and far too often have felt the same. |
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