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I let you
Contributed by
purplestary
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Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 05:00:46 PM in AEST
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you cut me, you bruise me
you hit me, you push me
you love me, you say that you love me.....
you leave me, you hang me
your def to me, your blind to me
you hide from me, you run from me
you love me, you say that you love me....
you tell me to go away
you don't see how much i just wanna stay
you tell me to come back and take it
you don't see that i can't anymore...
you asked me to trust you,
to say that i loved you is an understatement
you see, because i loved you so much
that i let you win every battle
but dear this war has just begun
all because i let you!
all because...i let you...
you cut me, you bruise me
you hit me, you push me
you love me, you say that you love me.......
you love me? you say that you love me!!!!??
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Re: I let you
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by Live2Die on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:16:31 PM AEST
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I really really love it, except the last line. The "you love me?" is good, but I'd change the next bit. However, its still a powerfuland yet sad write.
Stay Strong
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Re: I let you
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 03:39:29 PM AEST
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| i liked it a lot. A very strong piece you can feel the persons pain...great job |
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Re: I let you
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by needledancing on
Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 04:33:19 AM AEST
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Many ways in which we want to be loved but many ways which teach us we really can't handle or should not handle. Good advise on making sure love fits right.
My rule of thumb....if I am not feeling good about myself in a relationship...I move on.
When young and finding love we sure can settle for some strange situations. Thank goodness we grow and learn better through all the pain. My thanks. |
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Re: I let you
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by Butterat_Zool on
Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 09:15:24 PM AEST
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Good work making this one a song instead of just a poem. It has "sing me" written all over it. I'd like to see some more imagery, but that too is taken care of by the fact that these are song lyrics. Rock on, girl. Rock on.
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Re: I let you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 11:27:39 PM AEST
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Hey you ... powerful, strong lyrics here. It is GOOD to
get angry, especially when the object of the anger has
repeatedly taken advantage of your good nature and
played on sympathies ... sort of a wake up call.
You did well with this one, stary.. I could truly feel the
anger dripping from every line. A disdain that cuts as
easily as a knife ...
great post
[when we gonna see a new one? ;) ]
~Breezy
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