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IAM HERE AND YOUR NOT
Contributed by
tears_of_blood
on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 05:50:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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WE TALK BUT WHERE SO FAR AWAY WE CRY BUT NO ONE CAN SEE WE SMILE AND LAUGHED BUT CANT HEAR FOR WE TALK WITH WORDS NOT WITH VOICES THE KEYS I PUSH SO FAST TRYING TO KEEP UP BUT GETTING LEFT BEHIND ALL MISSED UP NOW REALLY FAR BEHIND WE TALK AGAIN ANOTHER DAY STARTS OFF THE SAME WAY BUT NOW ITS HARD TO SAY THE THINGS WE SAY FOR THIS TIME YOU MADE FAR SEEM CLOSE THE WORDS YOU SAID ARE WE NEED A BRAKE MY HART STOPED TEARS FALL FAST DEATH FEELS LIKE ITS ON MY BACK I OPEN MY MOUTH THEN I REMEMBER NO VOICE SO I TYPE WORD FOR WORD NO NO DONT LET THIS BE BUT YOU SAY ITS THE TIME YOU NEED NOT ANYONE ELSE YOU SEE TIME TO BE JUST YOU TO LIVE A LIFE THAT YOU HAVE NEVER SEEN TO MEANT THE PEOPLE YOU WOULD NEVER MEET SO I SET HERE READING THIS WORDS YOU TYPE BUT MY EYES DONT BELIEVE THE WORDS I READ TIME IS WHAT YOU NEED TIME IS WHAT I HAVE TO GIVE FOR AS MUCH TIME IT TAKES MY HART WELL NEVER LET GO FOR THIS LOVE IV GIVEN THE LOVE WE HAVE BOTH SHOWN IS SOMETHING NO ONE ELSE CAN HOLD YOU ARE MINE I AM YOURS WE SAID THESE WORDS BE FOR IT WAS THE NIGHT WE FELT THE THING THEY CALL TRUE LOVE.
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Re: IAM HERE AND YOUR NOT
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 09:39:20 AM AEST (User
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| oh my God - WOW! except for the few spelling mistakes and whatever...it was awesome. I assume the spelling errors are because you wrote it just kind of...as you were thinking. as thoughts came to mind you were writing...As you were feeling...you didn't think it out, didn't worry how it would sound. I love poems like that. |
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Re: IAM HERE AND YOUR NOT
(User Rating: 1 ) by tears_of_blood on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 09:44:13 PM AEST (User
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| thanks for that and yes i was doing just that haha hard to get them all right. |
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