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Hidden meanings
Contributed by
AshRayne
on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 09:19:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Cloaked in deception
Velvet lies caress you.
Sweet words soothe
Arms surround you.
Whispering in your ear
"Turn back now, do not linger."
Curiosity is overwhelmed
By chocolate kisses.
Turn away you shall,
From things not meant to be seen.
Peices of the puzzle are behind you.
Copyright ©
AshRayne
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2005-11-09 21:19:05]
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Re: Hidden meanings
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by grim6669 on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 09:34:50 PM AEST
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that's pretty kool...
*~amber~* |
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Re: Hidden meanings
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 09:38:26 PM AEST
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good job,
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Re: Hidden meanings
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 10:12:23 PM AEST
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We tend to be blind, to those most important messages. We don't nessecarily grasp what they actually are, or are too scared in the fact we might be wrong, and let it slip through our fingers. Another great write.
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Re: Hidden meanings
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:16:13 AM AEST
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wow very interesting and different.. i enjoyed this piece very much I like the last few lines best.. awesome job
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Re: Hidden meanings
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 11:09:39 PM AEST
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nice write ash very poetic and delicate but yet very deep and effective, well done . . .
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